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This is my attempt at fixing some of the errors of my first deviation.
So I am calling it my remastered version of the original.
Here is the original: [link]
Please let me know which you like better.
Comments are appreciated, as always. :D
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~Zamboniman Feb 1, 2013
The eyes look a little better in this one (if not blood shot). I don't know that i would do face shot's this close all the time. That can actually work against you. Having things that close to the camera can show off how plastic the props actually look It's usually somthing I try to avoid. That's not a knock agaisnt you, the figures look plastic naturally. The key is using lighting and shadows to make them appear more lifelike. Which is again harder to do upclose.

I do like the expression though, the tears look good as well.
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=ssj3gohan007 Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you so much for the advice, I will try to avoid making the close-ups to close. I always gone out of my way to get my character to fit the entire screen, well that stops now lol ;)

Thanks again :)
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~Zamboniman Feb 1, 2013
Yeah There really isn't much reason to do that. They don't really need to fill the entire screen to look good. Just experiment and have fun. Find your nitch
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=ssj3gohan007 Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is an excellent point, and its something that I should have thought of but I didn't. Thanks for the info, its pure gold for me. :D
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~Zamboniman Feb 1, 2013
I do what I can
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=ssj3gohan007 Feb 1, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
and I really appreciate it :)
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*Furbs3D Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice!

But in order to give you some advice about the render settings... I would need to have a look at the original render (no post-work) :P

Note me if you wish, my friend ;)
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=ssj3gohan007 Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I noted you ;)
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Mood: Joy !blazeredflame Jan 31, 2013
Much better eyes on this render! The skin tone is a bit different. Other then that I don't see too many differences. Keep making the renders! Me and everyone else would like to see more.
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=ssj3gohan007 Jan 31, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you, Blaze3D. That really means alot! :D
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